Its you, I love.

By November 3, 2011 10 Comments

Stay there, stay far
The less I know, the less of tar
The more of you, I love.

Let me create an image of you
Imagine you, feel you, each time a new.
The illusion of you, I love

Open armed across the ridges
Love smear my dry edges
The feel of you, I love

Love you my way, love you the other way
At my will, leave me at my fate you may
The shadow of you, I love

  • Alpana Jaiswal

    looks like someone is in love….beautifully written..keep going Anirban.

  • Anirban

    lol no one actually is fully in… on the verge… but dont want to..

  • shounak roy

    seems to me you are in love with someone you know but cant be yours

  • Saurish

    Excellent work and those lines the touchy i must say !! Take a bow Anirban Da !

  • I loved it…”love you my way, love you the other way”…
    Loved every bit of it…all so true…the fact that we always love an image, an illusion…very rarely we get the luxury to know the real self..or do we really? Whatever it is…”Stay there, stay far.”…or else it might mangle things up in our meager brain.

  • Bedit Banerjee

    Another great composition. So simple but holds such great significance. Bravo !!

  • Leo

    Oh so beautiful! 🙂 A wonderful way to say it. Liked it.

    Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

  • ashish

    one more “each time ,new feel”…good one…

  • Namrata Kumari

    “The less I know, the less of tar The more of you, I love”- is the line I loved the most… it goes with my life. More I investigate or get close to someone, the loop holes starts emerging out. Loving the illusion is what gives me happiness, whereas the reality’s so unattractive.

  • Namrata Kumari

    *loop holes start

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