Stay there, stay far
The less I know, the less of tar
The more of you, I love.
Let me create an image of you
Imagine you, feel you, each time a new.
The illusion of you, I love
Open armed across the ridges
Love smear my dry edges
The feel of you, I love
Love you my way, love you the other way
At my will, leave me at my fate you may
The shadow of you, I love
looks like someone is in love….beautifully written..keep going Anirban.
lol no one actually is fully in… on the verge… but dont want to..
seems to me you are in love with someone you know but cant be yours
Excellent work and those lines the touchy i must say !! Take a bow Anirban Da !
Sreyasi Nag Chowdhury
I loved it…”love you my way, love you the other way”…
Loved every bit of it…all so true…the fact that we always love an image, an illusion…very rarely we get the luxury to know the real self..or do we really? Whatever it is…”Stay there, stay far.”…or else it might mangle things up in our meager brain.
Another great composition. So simple but holds such great significance. Bravo !!
Oh so beautiful! 🙂 A wonderful way to say it. Liked it.
Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
one more “each time ,new feel”…good one…
“The less I know, the less of tar The more of you, I love”- is the line I loved the most… it goes with my life. More I investigate or get close to someone, the loop holes starts emerging out. Loving the illusion is what gives me happiness, whereas the reality’s so unattractive.
*loop holes start